Great piece. Bravo!

…, blunt, even cruel woman.” Okay, not so bad. But how about proving it by giving specific examples? Think of yourself as a lawyer having to back up your general statements — judgments — with hardcore evidence. And evidence can take the form of dialogue, too. “I can’t help you,” the coiffed, immaculate matchmaker said to the stunned applicant seated across from her. “Nobody likes a girl with garlic breath.”
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Great piece. Bravo!
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